Viewing Dongting Lake, for Chancellor Zhang
望洞庭湖贈張丞相
Wàng Dòngtíng hú zèng Zhāng chéng xiàng
The vast lake becomes an indirect request for a way into public service. Read the Chinese, pinyin, word meanings, and original English translation.
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Word meanings — Line 1
- 八月 bā yuè eighth lunar month
- 湖水 hú shuǐ lake water
- 平 píng level
Word meanings — Line 2
- 涵虛 hán xū hold the empty sky
- 混 hùn mingle
- 太清 tài qīng high clear heavens
Word meanings — Line 3
- 氣 qì vapor
- 蒸 zhēng steam
- 雲夢澤 yún mèng zé Yunmeng marshes
Word meanings — Line 4
- 波 bō waves
- 撼 hàn shake
- 岳陽城 yuè yáng chéng Yueyang city
Word meanings — Line 5
- 欲濟 yù jì wish to cross
- 無 wú without
- 舟楫 zhōu jí boat and oars
Word meanings — Line 6
- 端居 duān jū remain idle
- 恥 chǐ be ashamed
- 聖明 shèng míng enlightened rule
Word meanings — Line 7
- 坐觀 zuò guān sit and watch
- 垂釣者 chuí diào zhě people fishing
Word meanings — Line 8
- 徒有 tú yǒu have only
- 羨魚 xiàn yú envy the fish caught
- 情 qíng feeling
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Original
八月湖水平,
涵虛混太清。
氣蒸雲夢澤,
波撼岳陽城。
欲濟無舟楫,
端居恥聖明。
坐觀垂釣者,
徒有羨魚情。
Translation
In the eighth month, the lake rises level;
holding the empty sky, it mingles with the heavens.
Vapor steams over the Yunmeng marshes;
waves shake the city of Yueyang.
I want to cross, but have no boat or oars;
to sit idle shames me in an enlightened reign.
I sit watching those who fish,
with nothing but the wish for their catch.
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Line 1 · What does the marked word mean?
八月湖水平,
Pronunciation hint
bā yuè
Reveal meaning and translation
八月 — eighth lunar month
In the eighth month, the lake rises level;
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Line 5 · What does the marked word mean?
欲濟無舟楫,
Pronunciation hint
yù jì
Reveal meaning and translation
欲濟 — wish to cross
I want to cross, but have no boat or oars;
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Line 8 · What does the marked word mean?
徒有羨魚情。
Pronunciation hint
tú yǒu
Reveal meaning and translation
徒有 — have only
with nothing but the wish for their catch.
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Lines 1–2 · Lake and sky become continuous
八月 sets the season, and 平 gives the lake the appearance of a level expanse. 涵虛 suggests that the water holds the empty sky. 太清 is the high heavens. The English carries the two verbs through one sentence so the reader can follow the holding and mingling.
Lines 3–4 · The water has force
蒸 lets vapor rise over Yunmeng’s marshes, while 撼 makes the waves seem powerful enough to shake Yueyang. The lake that looked level in the opening can also move upward and strike outward. The speaker gives it room and force before asking how to cross it.
Lines 5–6 · What it takes to cross
欲濟 changes the view to a wish to get across. 無舟楫 supplies a practical obstacle, no boat or oars. 端居 and 恥 then put the speaker’s idleness in relation to an enlightened reign, 聖明. With a chancellor named as the recipient, crossing can suggest the help required to enter service. The English keeps the boat and oars so the petition remains indirect.
Lines 7–8 · Watching others take part
垂釣者 are the people lowering their lines. 坐觀 keeps the speaker seated and watching, echoing the enforced idleness of 端居. 徒 gives the last wish its limit. He can envy their catch and see what he wants to do, but the means remain with those already taking part.
Form and tone
The five-character regulated verse devotes its first half to an expansive scene and its second to an indirect appeal. 平, 清, 城, 明, and 情 maintain the rhyme. The lake is both a landscape and the material of the petition.
See the regulated verse guide for the form. Pinyin gives modern Mandarin pronunciation; no unverified historical tone grid is supplied.
Historical context
The title’s named recipient is essential to the poem’s social action. Removing it can make the closing appear merely to describe an unequipped traveler. The poem praises the public world while asking for a practical way to take part in it.
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Meng Haoran. “Viewing Dongting Lake, for Chancellor Zhang” (望洞庭湖贈張丞相). PoemWell. English translation by PoemWell. Updated .
https://poemwell.org/poems/viewing-dongting-lake-for-chancellor-zhang
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