Song of the River at Dusk

暮江吟

Mù jiāng yín

Sunset divides the river into colors; night brings a crescent moon and pearl-like dew. Read the original Chinese with pinyin, word meanings, an original English translation, and notes.

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01

一道殘陽鋪水中,

yí dào cán yáng pū shuǐ zhōng

A band of fading sunlight spreads across the water;

Word meanings — Line 1
  1. 一道 yí dào one band
  2. 殘陽 cán yáng setting sunlight
  3. 鋪 pū spread
  4. 水中 shuǐ zhōng on the water
02

半江瑟瑟半江紅。

bàn jiāng sè sè bàn jiāng hóng

half the river is green-blue, half the river red.

Word meanings — Line 2
  1. 半江 bàn jiāng half the river
  2. 瑟瑟 sè sè green-blue
  3. 半江 bàn jiāng half the river
  4. 紅 hóng red
03

可憐九月初三夜,

kě lián jiǔ yuè chū sān yè

How lovely, this night of the ninth month's third day:

Word meanings — Line 3
  1. 可憐 kě lián lovely
  2. 九月 jiǔ yuè ninth lunar month
  3. 初三 chū sān third day
  4. 夜 yè night
04

露似真珠月似弓。

lù sì zhēn zhū yuè sì gōng

dew like pearls, the moon like a bow.

Word meanings — Line 4
  1. 露 lù dew
  2. 似 sì like
  3. 真珠 zhēn zhū pearls
  4. 月 yuè moon
  5. 似 sì like
  6. 弓 gōng bow

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Original

一道殘陽鋪水中,

半江瑟瑟半江紅。

可憐九月初三夜,

露似真珠月似弓。

Translation

A band of fading sunlight spreads across the water;

half the river is green-blue, half the river red.

How lovely, this night of the ninth month's third day:

dew like pearls, the moon like a bow.

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  1. Line 1 · What does the marked word mean?

    一道殘陽鋪水中,

    Pronunciation hint

    yí dào

    Reveal meaning and translation

    一道 — one band

    A band of fading sunlight spreads across the water;

  2. Line 3 · What does the marked word mean?

    可憐九月初三夜,

    Pronunciation hint

    kě lián

    Reveal meaning and translation

    可憐 — lovely

    How lovely, this night of the ninth month's third day:

  3. Line 4 · What does the marked word mean?

    露似真珠月似弓。

    Pronunciation hint

    zhēn zhū

    Reveal meaning and translation

    真珠 — pearls

    dew like pearls, the moon like a bow.

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Lines 1–2: light laid over water

一道 makes the last sunlight a visible strip. 鋪 gives it the action of spreading out across a surface. 殘陽 means what remains of the setting sun. In the next line, 半江 repeats, dividing the view by color. 瑟瑟 is green-blue here. The repetition helps the ear register the contrast with 紅 without turning the river into a measured diagram.

Lines 3–4: the dew and the moon share a pattern

可憐 is affectionate admiration in this setting. 九月初三 is a lunar date early in the month, fitting the crescent named by the bow comparison. 露似真珠 and 月似弓 share 似 and place a very small shape beside a distant one. The English keeps both “like” phrases. 真珠 is the source’s spelling for pearls.

Form and tone

The seven-character quatrain changes its light between the two couplets. A sunset view gives way to a night view, so the whole scene should not be read as one frozen instant. 中, 紅, and 弓 provide the rhyme. Repeated 半江 and 似 create balance at different scales.

See the jueju guide for the form. Pinyin gives modern Mandarin; no historical tone grid is supplied.

Historical context

The poem names a day within a lunar month but does not name the river or the year. Its movement from the sun’s remaining light to a young moon can be followed without attaching it to a particular journey. Delight is stated once, in 可憐, then given specific shapes and colors rather than a general account of the speaker’s happiness.

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Sources

暮江吟, public transcription. We retain 瑟瑟 and 真珠, the readings displayed in the linked text. Punctuation and reading-line divisions are editorial.

English translation, gloss, and notes by PoemWell. The translation is original to this site.

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Bai Juyi. “Song of the River at Dusk” (暮江吟). PoemWell. English translation by PoemWell. Updated .

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