Song of the River at Dusk
暮江吟
Mù jiāng yín
Sunset divides the river into colors; night brings a crescent moon and pearl-like dew. Read the original Chinese with pinyin, word meanings, an original English translation, and notes.
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Word meanings — Line 1
- 一道 yí dào one band
- 殘陽 cán yáng setting sunlight
- 鋪 pū spread
- 水中 shuǐ zhōng on the water
Word meanings — Line 2
- 半江 bàn jiāng half the river
- 瑟瑟 sè sè green-blue
- 半江 bàn jiāng half the river
- 紅 hóng red
Word meanings — Line 3
- 可憐 kě lián lovely
- 九月 jiǔ yuè ninth lunar month
- 初三 chū sān third day
- 夜 yè night
Word meanings — Line 4
- 露 lù dew
- 似 sì like
- 真珠 zhēn zhū pearls
- 月 yuè moon
- 似 sì like
- 弓 gōng bow
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Original
一道殘陽鋪水中,
半江瑟瑟半江紅。
可憐九月初三夜,
露似真珠月似弓。
Translation
A band of fading sunlight spreads across the water;
half the river is green-blue, half the river red.
How lovely, this night of the ninth month's third day:
dew like pearls, the moon like a bow.
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Line 1 · What does the marked word mean?
一道殘陽鋪水中,
Pronunciation hint
yí dào
Reveal meaning and translation
一道 — one band
A band of fading sunlight spreads across the water;
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Line 3 · What does the marked word mean?
可憐九月初三夜,
Pronunciation hint
kě lián
Reveal meaning and translation
可憐 — lovely
How lovely, this night of the ninth month's third day:
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Line 4 · What does the marked word mean?
露似真珠月似弓。
Pronunciation hint
zhēn zhū
Reveal meaning and translation
真珠 — pearls
dew like pearls, the moon like a bow.
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Line-by-line notes
Lines 1–2: light laid over water
一道 makes the last sunlight a visible strip. 鋪 gives it the action of spreading out across a surface. 殘陽 means what remains of the setting sun. In the next line, 半江 repeats, dividing the view by color. 瑟瑟 is green-blue here. The repetition helps the ear register the contrast with 紅 without turning the river into a measured diagram.
Lines 3–4: the dew and the moon share a pattern
可憐 is affectionate admiration in this setting. 九月初三 is a lunar date early in the month, fitting the crescent named by the bow comparison. 露似真珠 and 月似弓 share 似 and place a very small shape beside a distant one. The English keeps both “like” phrases. 真珠 is the source’s spelling for pearls.
Form and tone
The seven-character quatrain changes its light between the two couplets. A sunset view gives way to a night view, so the whole scene should not be read as one frozen instant. 中, 紅, and 弓 provide the rhyme. Repeated 半江 and 似 create balance at different scales.
See the jueju guide for the form. Pinyin gives modern Mandarin; no historical tone grid is supplied.
Historical context
The poem names a day within a lunar month but does not name the river or the year. Its movement from the sun’s remaining light to a young moon can be followed without attaching it to a particular journey. Delight is stated once, in 可憐, then given specific shapes and colors rather than a general account of the speaker’s happiness.
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Sources
暮江吟, public transcription. We retain 瑟瑟 and 真珠, the readings displayed in the linked text. Punctuation and reading-line divisions are editorial.
English translation, gloss, and notes by PoemWell. The translation is original to this site.
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Bai Juyi. “Song of the River at Dusk” (暮江吟). PoemWell. English translation by PoemWell. Updated .
https://poemwell.org/poems/song-of-the-river-at-dusk
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