Sending Off a Monk

送上人

Sòng shàng rén

A solitary monk is compared with a cloud and a crane. Read why a famous mountain retreat may already be too well known to offer the seclusion he seeks.

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01

孤雲將野鶴,

gū yún jiāng yě hè

A solitary cloud with a wild crane:

Word meanings — Line 1
  1. 孤 gū solitary
  2. 雲 yún cloud
  3. 將 jiāng with
  4. 野 yě wild
  5. 鶴 hè crane
02

豈向人間住。

qǐ xiàng rén jiān zhù

how could you stay in the human world?

Word meanings — Line 2
  1. 豈 qǐ how could
  2. 向 xiàng toward
  3. 人 rén human
  4. 間 jiān world
  5. 住 zhù stay
03

莫買沃洲山,

mò mǎi wò zhōu shān

Do not buy a retreat on Mount Wozhou;

Word meanings — Line 3
  1. 莫 mò do not
  2. 買 mǎi buy
  3. 沃 wò Wo
  4. 洲 zhōu zhou
  5. 山 shān mountain
04

時人已知處。

shí rén yǐ zhī chù

people already know where that is.

Word meanings — Line 4
  1. 時 shí present-day
  2. 人 rén people
  3. 已 yǐ already
  4. 知 zhī know
  5. 處 chù place

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Original

孤雲將野鶴,

豈向人間住。

莫買沃洲山,

時人已知處。

Translation

A solitary cloud with a wild crane:

how could you stay in the human world?

Do not buy a retreat on Mount Wozhou;

people already know where that is.

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  1. Line 1 · What does the marked word mean?

    孤雲將野鶴,

    Pronunciation hint

    jiāng

    Reveal meaning and translation

    將 — with

    A solitary cloud with a wild crane:

  2. Line 3 · What does the marked word mean?

    莫買沃洲山,

    Pronunciation hint

    wò

    Reveal meaning and translation

    沃 — Wo

    Do not buy a retreat on Mount Wozhou;

  3. Line 4 · What does the marked word mean?

    時人已知處。

    Pronunciation hint

    yǐ

    Reveal meaning and translation

    已 — already

    people already know where that is.

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Lines 1–2 — A portrait by resemblance

將 connects the solitary cloud and wild crane. Each can go on without attachment to one dwelling. 豈 makes the question rhetorical, so the English asks “how could you stay?” 人間 is the human world in the question, with the monk’s freedom understood through the first line’s images.

Lines 3–4 — How secluded is a famous mountain?

莫 turns the praise into advice. 買 does mean “buy.” The English supplies “a retreat” to show what could be acquired on Mount Wozhou. The answer comes in the practical 已知處, that people already know the location. The earlier question placed the monk far from ordinary human affairs. The last line imagines what will happen when ordinary people know precisely where to find him.

Form and tone

This five-character quatrain moves from airy comparison to a concrete prohibition. The final matter-of-fact line gently punctures the grandeur of the cloud and crane. The shift makes the farewell conversational rather than merely an elevated portrait.

See jueju for the larger formal pattern. Pinyin gives modern Mandarin pronunciation; a historical level/oblique grid is not inferred from those modern tones.

Historical context

Mount Wozhou was associated with religious retreat in literary memory. The poem assumes that reputation while warning that reputation itself attracts attention. It does not document a real property transaction or establish the precise destination of the monk being addressed.

Continue with Liu Changqing and the farewell reading path. Compare Seeing Off the Monk Lingche and Seeking a Hermit, Without Finding Him using the reading connections below.

Sources

送上人 — Chinese text. Checked against the linked Wikisource transcription. The displayed traditional text follows this reading. Punctuation and line breaks are editorial. Translation, glosses, and reading notes are original to PoemWell.

English translation, gloss, and notes by PoemWell. The translation is original to this site.

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Liu Changqing. “Sending Off a Monk” (送上人). PoemWell. English translation by PoemWell. Updated .

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