Returning Home: I

回鄉偶書二首(其一)

Huí xiāng ǒu shū èr shǒu · qí yī

A returning traveler keeps his home accent, but a new generation recognizes him only as a visitor. Read the original Chinese with pinyin, word meanings, an original English translation, and notes.

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01

少小離家老大回,

shào xiǎo lí jiā lǎo dà huí

I left home young and come back old;

Word meanings — Line 1
  1. 少小 shào xiǎo when young
  2. 離家 lí jiā leave home
  3. 老大 lǎo dà old
  4. 回 huí return
02

鄉音無改鬢毛衰。

xiāng yīn wú gǎi bìn máo shuāi

the home accent is unchanged, but the hair at my temples has thinned.

Word meanings — Line 2
  1. 鄉音 xiāng yīn home accent
  2. 無改 wú gǎi unchanged
  3. 鬢毛 bìn máo temple hair
  4. 衰 shuāi decline; thin
03

兒童相見不相識,

ér tóng xiāng jiàn bù xiāng shí

The children see me and do not recognize me;

Word meanings — Line 3
  1. 兒童 ér tóng children
  2. 相見 xiāng jiàn see me
  3. 不相識 bù xiāng shí do not recognize me
04

笑問客從何處來。

xiào wèn kè cóng hé chù lái

smiling, they ask where this visitor has come from.

Word meanings — Line 4
  1. 笑問 xiào wèn ask with a smile
  2. 客 kè visitor
  3. 從 cóng from
  4. 何處 hé chù where
  5. 來 lái come

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Original

少小離家老大回,

鄉音無改鬢毛衰。

兒童相見不相識,

笑問客從何處來。

Translation

I left home young and come back old;

the home accent is unchanged, but the hair at my temples has thinned.

The children see me and do not recognize me;

smiling, they ask where this visitor has come from.

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  1. Line 1 · What does the marked word mean?

    少小離家老大回,

    Pronunciation hint

    shào xiǎo

    Reveal meaning and translation

    少小 — when young

    I left home young and come back old;

  2. Line 3 · What does the marked word mean?

    兒童相見不相識,

    Pronunciation hint

    ér tóng

    Reveal meaning and translation

    兒童 — children

    The children see me and do not recognize me;

  3. Line 4 · What does the marked word mean?

    笑問客從何處來。

    Pronunciation hint

    xiào wèn

    Reveal meaning and translation

    笑問 — ask with a smile

    smiling, they ask where this visitor has come from.

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Lines 1–2 — What returns unchanged

少小 and 老大 put the beginning and end of an absence in the same line. 離 and 回 do the work of the whole intervening journey. 鄉音 then gives the speaker one thing he has kept, his home accent, while 鬢毛衰 shows the years at his temples. The English adds “but” to bring out that contrast. We use the modern Mandarin reading shuāi for 衰 in its sense of decline. That reading does not reconstruct the historical rhyme.

Lines 3–4 — A question for a stranger

相 in 不相識 is directed toward the speaker. The children see him and do not know who he is. 笑 makes their question friendly on the surface, so the force falls on 客, “visitor.” The older man’s 回 in line one described a return, while the children’s 來 at the end treats the same movement as an arrival from somewhere else. The reader can hear both descriptions at once. The poem ends before the traveler has to answer.

Form and tone

This seven-character quatrain compresses a lifetime in its first line and an immediate encounter in its last two. 回 and 來 both concern arrival, yet the final 來 is framed by the children’s question. The historical rhyme cannot be inferred simply from today’s reading of 衰.

See the jueju guide for the form. Pinyin gives modern Mandarin; no historical tone grid is supplied.

Historical context

Homecoming does not automatically restore recognition. The speaker’s accent connects him to a place, while the children’s unfamiliarity locates him outside their lived memory. The source presents this as the first of two homecoming poems; the second considers changes over the years through a different scene. This page keeps the first encounter complete in itself.

Read more by He Zhizhang, or follow the homesickness shelf. The English translation, gloss, and notes are original to PoemWell.

Sources

回鄉偶書二首, public transcription. The first poem, following 無改, 鬢毛衰, and 笑問. The transcription records alternatives at these points. Punctuation and reading-line divisions are editorial.

English translation, gloss, and notes by PoemWell. The translation is original to this site.

The Chinese source is shown in traditional characters by default, with a simplified view available. Pinyin is modern standard Mandarin, a reading aid, not Tang or Song pronunciation.

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He Zhizhang. “Returning Home: I” (回鄉偶書二首(其一)). PoemWell. English translation by PoemWell. Updated .

https://poemwell.org/poems/returning-home-one

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