Returning Geese

歸雁

Guī Yàn

Qian Qi gives geese a mythic reason to leave the beautiful Xiao-Xiang region: moonlit zither music whose sorrow is too much to bear.

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01

瀟湘何事等閒回,

xiāo xiāng hé shì děng xián huí

Why leave Xiao-Xiang and return so readily?

Word meanings — Line 1
  1. 瀟 xiāo Xiao
  2. 湘 xiāng Xiang
  3. 何 hé what
  4. 事 shì reason
  5. 等 děng casually
  6. 閒 xián idly
  7. 回 huí return
02

水碧沙明兩岸苔。

shuǐ bì shā míng liǎng àn tái

The water is green, the sand bright, moss lines both banks.

Word meanings — Line 2
  1. 水 shuǐ water
  2. 碧 bì jade green
  3. 沙 shā sand
  4. 明 míng bright
  5. 兩 liǎng both
  6. 岸 àn banks
  7. 苔 tái moss
03

二十五弦彈夜月,

èr shí wǔ xián tán yè yuè

Twenty-five strings sound beneath the moon at night;

Word meanings — Line 3
  1. 二 èr two
  2. 十 shí ten
  3. 五 wǔ five
  4. 弦 xián strings
  5. 彈 tán play
  6. 夜 yè night
  7. 月 yuè moon
04

不勝清怨卻飛來。

bù shēng qīng yuàn què fēi lái

unable to bear that clear lament, the geese have flown here.

Word meanings — Line 4
  1. 不 bù not
  2. 勝 shēng bear
  3. 清 qīng pure
  4. 怨 yuàn lament
  5. 卻 què turn back
  6. 飛 fēi fly
  7. 來 lái come

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Original

瀟湘何事等閒回,

水碧沙明兩岸苔。

二十五弦彈夜月,

不勝清怨卻飛來。

Translation

Why leave Xiao-Xiang and return so readily?

The water is green, the sand bright, moss lines both banks.

Twenty-five strings sound beneath the moon at night;

unable to bear that clear lament, the geese have flown here.

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  1. Line 1 · What does the marked word mean?

    瀟湘何事等閒回,

    Pronunciation hint

    shì

    Reveal meaning and translation

    事 — reason

    Why leave Xiao-Xiang and return so readily?

  2. Line 3 · What does the marked word mean?

    二十五弦彈夜月,

    Pronunciation hint

    xián

    Reveal meaning and translation

    弦 — strings

    Twenty-five strings sound beneath the moon at night;

  3. Line 4 · What does the marked word mean?

    不勝清怨卻飛來。

    Pronunciation hint

    yuàn

    Reveal meaning and translation

    怨 — lament

    unable to bear that clear lament, the geese have flown here.

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Lines 1–2 · Why leave a place like this?

The title supplies the geese as the unspoken addressees. 何事 asks what has made them turn back, and 等閒 suggests an action taken readily or lightly. Then the second line seems to make departure less explicable. 水碧, 沙明, and 兩岸苔 set three bright or green details in view. The place being left has plenty to recommend it to the eye.

Lines 3–4 · What sight cannot explain

二十五弦 points to the many-stringed se zither and evokes the music of the Xiang spirits. Under the moon, that music has a 清怨, a clear-sounding lament. 卻 turns the answer back toward the geese and their flight. The English supplies the birds as the subject again and reads their migration as the poem’s imagined response to sorrowful music. 不勝 means “cannot bear” and uses the retained literary reading bù shēng here. Modern Mandarin also commonly uses shèng in this sense. Ministry of Education dictionary

Form and tone

This seven-character quatrain uses question and answer across its two halves. A beautiful visual scene is overturned by an unbearable sound. The subject supplied by the title arrives explicitly in the English ending. No historical tone grid is supplied.

Historical context

Qian Qi links actual migrating geese with a mythic southern soundscape. The poem's homesickness is indirect: a returning bird carries human susceptibility to music and longing. His longer Xiang Spirit poem gives that soundscape more room and ends with silence instead of flight.

Sources

Chinese text follows Gui yan, Quan Tang shi, juan 239. 閑 is normalized to 閒. Punctuation is editorial. English translation and annotations are original to PoemWell. The retained literary reading of 不勝 is recorded in the Ministry of Education dictionary.

English translation, gloss, and notes by PoemWell. The translation is original to this site.

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