Army Song: The Report Arrives

從軍行七首(其五)

Cóng jūn xíng qī shǒu · qí wǔ

Wang Changling begins with troops moving into dust, then lets an earlier battle arrive as a report before the march is complete.

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01

大漠風塵日色昏,

dà mò fēng chén rì sè hūn

Wind and dust dim the daylight over the great desert;

Word meanings — Line 1
  1. 大 dà great
  2. 漠 mò desert
  3. 風 fēng wind
  4. 塵 chén dust
  5. 日 rì sun
  6. 色 sè light
  7. 昏 hūn dim
02

紅旗半捲出轅門。

hóng qí bàn juǎn chū yuán mén

a red flag, half furled, passes out through the camp gate.

Word meanings — Line 2
  1. 紅 hóng red
  2. 旗 qí flag
  3. 半 bàn half
  4. 捲 juǎn rolled
  5. 出 chū leaves
  6. 轅 yuán camp
  7. 門 mén gate
03

前軍夜戰洮河北,

qián jūn yè zhàn táo hé běi

The advance force fought north of the Tao River last night—

Word meanings — Line 3
  1. 前 qián advance
  2. 軍 jūn army
  3. 夜 yè night
  4. 戰 zhàn battle
  5. 洮 táo Tao
  6. 河 hé River
  7. 北 běi north
04

已報生擒吐谷渾。

yǐ bào shēng qín tǔ yù hún

news already says the Tuyuhun leader was taken alive.

Word meanings — Line 4
  1. 已 yǐ already
  2. 報 bào report
  3. 生 shēng alive
  4. 擒 qín capture
  5. 吐 tǔ Tu
  6. 谷 yù yu
  7. 渾 hún hun

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Original

大漠風塵日色昏,

紅旗半捲出轅門。

前軍夜戰洮河北,

已報生擒吐谷渾。

Translation

Wind and dust dim the daylight over the great desert;

a red flag, half furled, passes out through the camp gate.

The advance force fought north of the Tao River last night—

news already says the Tuyuhun leader was taken alive.

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  1. Line 1 · What does the marked word mean?

    大漠風塵日色昏,

    Pronunciation hint

    chén

    Reveal meaning and translation

    塵 — dust

    Wind and dust dim the daylight over the great desert;

  2. Line 3 · What does the marked word mean?

    前軍夜戰洮河北,

    Pronunciation hint

    zhàn

    Reveal meaning and translation

    戰 — battle

    The advance force fought north of the Tao River last night—

  3. Line 4 · What does the marked word mean?

    已報生擒吐谷渾。

    Pronunciation hint

    qín

    Reveal meaning and translation

    擒 — capture

    news already says the Tuyuhun leader was taken alive.

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Lines 1–2 · A flag moves through dust

日色昏 makes the daylight dim. 風塵 gives the desert a wind full of dust and can also suggest the commotion of a campaign. The half-furled flag stays visible in that haze. 出轅門 gives it a definite direction through the army camp’s gate. The reader sees this force setting out.

Lines 3–4 · The report is ahead of the march

前軍 identifies the troops already in advance. 夜戰 places their fighting north of the Tao River at night. 已報 then makes the news arrive before the poem has described a battle in progress. 生擒 means taking someone alive. 吐谷渾, Tǔyùhún, names the historical people or polity and stands for the opposing leader in the English. The poem leaves combat between its two moments, the sight of departure and the receipt of completed news.

Form and tone

This fifth seven-character jueju rhymes 昏, 門, and 渾. The hinge is 已, 'already': the second pair overtakes the marching first pair with completed news. Modern pinyin is supplied; no historical level/oblique grid is invented.

Historical context

Wang Changling can make a frontier poem out of the transmission of news. Compare The Vow at Qinghai, which leaves victory in the future, and Beyond the Frontier: After the Battle, which keeps the reader among combat's physical residues. Each chooses a different distance from the fighting.

Sources

《全唐詩》, juan 143, Wang Changling; the main reading in the Wikisource transcription is followed. A numbered poem is printed complete, not excerpted from within a poem. Punctuation is editorial.

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Wang Changling. “Army Song: The Report Arrives” (從軍行七首(其五)). PoemWell. English translation by PoemWell. Updated .

https://poemwell.org/poems/army-song-victory-report

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